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**always better to link to existing pages, rather then just link to LH. in this case the JKW commentary | **always better to link to existing pages, rather then just link to LH. in this case the JKW commentary | ||
**if quote is from a book, better write 'writes' than 'says' | **if quote is from a book, better write 'writes' than 'says' | ||
*[[Mani mantra]] | |||
**great additions! | |||
**maybe you could add kyperlinks to individual 6 paramitas and 6 realms | |||
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Revision as of 09:13, 23 November 2023
Feedback on recent edits
- Amitabha article:
- could you source the sentence you added?
- we don't use diacritics in the text of articles for Skt. See Editorial Guidelines
- you use 'limitless light' when above we used 'boundless light'
- no need to add 'The Display of the Pure Land of Sukhāvatī' in the External links since the Sutra is already quoted in the article and leads to the Sutra article: Amitabhavyuha Sutra
- Sukhavati article
- same remark for diacritics
- would be good to add source for sentences added
- same remark on removing translations fo sutras
- Avalokiteshvara article
- nice additions to the articles, well referenced
- it's good to inserts hyperlinks to new material
- some external links not needed
- Vajra Guru mantra
- always better to link to existing pages, rather then just link to LH. in this case the JKW commentary
- if quote is from a book, better write 'writes' than 'says'
- Mani mantra
- great additions!
- maybe you could add kyperlinks to individual 6 paramitas and 6 realms