User talk:Robert de Boer

Feedback on recent edits

• Amitabha article:
  • could you source the sentence you added?
  • we don't use diacritics in the text of articles for Skt. See Editorial Guidelines
  • you use 'limitless light' when above we used 'boundless light'
  • no need to add 'The Display of the Pure Land of Sukhāvatī' in the External links since the Sutra is already quoted in the article and leads to the Sutra article: Amitabhavyuha Sutra
• Sukhavati article
  • same remark for diacritics
  • would be good to add source for sentences added
  • same remark on removing translations fo sutras
• Avalokiteshvara article
  • nice additions to the articles, well referenced
  • it's good to inserts hyperlinks to new material
  • some external links not needed
• Vajra Guru mantra
  • always better to link to existing pages, rather then just link to LH. in this case the JKW commentary
  • if quote is from a book, better write 'writes' than 'says'
• Mani mantra
  • great additions!
  • maybe you could add kyperlinks to individual 6 paramitas and 6 realms